Ab yaad na aa
Reprise
ab yaad na aa ab yaad na kar
kuchh shaad huuN mai.n naashaad na kar
% shaad = happy; naashaad = unhappy
dil tuut gayaa thaa jo.D liyaa
phir ghaav hare aabaad na kar
kuchh paauu.N tamannaa hai dil me.n
ummiid naii barabaad na kar
qismat ki zafaayen khatm hu_ii
aafat ko magar imdaad na kar
% imdaad = assist, help.
ab yaad na aa ab yaad na kar
kuchh shaad huuN mai.n naashaad na kar
% shaad = happy; naashaad = unhappy
dil tuut gayaa thaa jo.D liyaa
phir ghaav hare aabaad na kar
kuchh paauu.N tamannaa hai dil me.n
ummiid naii barabaad na kar
qismat ki zafaayen khatm hu_ii
aafat ko magar imdaad na kar
% imdaad = assist, help.
posted by Gulgula @ 2:49 PM
9 Comments:
nayee subeh kay deedar main
apni shaamein burbaad naa ker
nayee ruttein ayeeingee
muger unke intezar main
apni dhadkanein baiqarar na ker
chahet,muzil piyaar
sub hain lufzoon kay junjaal
inki wehshtoon say
apnay dil ko abaad naa ker
Good one Sebia! Wish you had a good command over meter and then we could finish up with a great qawwalii!
best
B
Bhaaluu & Sebia,
Your songs warms the heart, inspires the mind, soothes the soul...
Such a nice comment Shabnam*. Accept thanks from my (our) side. Your wishes are encouraging. Watch out for more poems coming up here :),
best
B
* - In an urdu poetry mood it's better to call Dewdrop as Shabnam, isn't it!
My parents just missed naming me Shabnam :) and I look forward to more beautiful lines from you.
hey,
great lines...
both urs n sebia's
continue writtin.n yeah don forget to inform me
Scarlett
Amazing lines bhaaluu.....
Aromatic lines bhaaluu....
Attractive lines bhaaluu..
Authentic lines bhaaluu...
Ambitious lines bhaaluu...
In short keep writing bhaaluu.....
Tims
Amazing lines bhaaluu.....
Aromatic lines bhaaluu....
Attractive lines bhaaluu..
Authentic lines bhaaluu...
Ambitious lines bhaaluu...
In short keep writing bhaaluu.....
Tims
Thanks for the sweet comments Tims. I will continue writing a few more, till my breathe lasts,
Best
B
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